1 files changed, 10 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/fox.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/fox.md
index 74aa1bc..95050bb 100644
--- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/fox.md
+++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/fox.md
@@ -4,11 +4,17 @@ unlisted: true
 ---
 
 I am not a fox.
-It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type this text on a keyboard, or come up with it in the first place.
+It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, or come up with this text in the first place.
 A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer either.
 But despite reality being what it is, my existence as a human being doesn't feel right to me.
-I've felt this way for pretty much my entire life.
+It never has.
 
 I was 6 years old when I first became aware that something was wrong.
-I'm sure most of have seen the movie "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, wherein the protagonist Arthur is transformed into various animals to learn about physics and other things.
-When I watched this movie, I was fascinated by the idea of being a bird and wondered what it would feel like to be one.
+I'm sure many of you have seen the movie "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, wherein the protagonist Arthur is transformed into various animals to learn valuable life lessons.
+I was watching it one evening and became fascinated by the idea of possessing a nonhuman body, especially that of a bird.
+What would it be like to experience to world as one?
+To be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the air?
+Thinking about this felt right to me.
+Or rather, it felt like for the first time in my life, a persistent feeling of discomfort I hadn't noticed before was suddenly gone.
+This moment marks the beginning 
+