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 I am not a fox.
 It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
 A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
-But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.
+But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human being doesn't feel right to me.
 It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
@@ -15,13 +15,12 @@ What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered
 As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
 I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
-And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.
+Nothing exciting happened for a while, until I got introduced to fantasy novels 7 years later and felt I was supposed to be a dragon.
-I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.
-4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
-During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.
+By then, I had 
-Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?
+I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
-Were there other people like me?
-I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
 Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
-It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I 
+It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.
+

diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md index 2965302..593aee2 100644 --- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md +++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md
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6	I am not a fox.	6	I am not a fox.
7	It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.	7	It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
8	A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.	8	A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
9	But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.	9	But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human being doesn't feel right to me.
10		10
11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.	11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.	12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
@@ -15,13 +15,12 @@ What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered
15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.	15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
16	I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.	16	I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
17		17
18	And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.	18	Nothing exciting happened for a while, until I got introduced to fantasy novels 7 years later and felt I was supposed to be a dragon.
19	I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.	19
20	4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.	20
21	During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.	21	By then, I had
22	Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?	22	I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
23	Were there other people like me?
24	I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
25		23
26	Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.	24	Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
27	It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I	25	It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.
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