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--- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md
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@@ -11,13 +11,11 @@ But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human never fel
 It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
-What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
+What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
-As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for another one.
+As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for something else.
-Driven by this desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.
+Driven by this strange desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.
-23 years later, foxes have taken the place of birds after a detour with dragons and wolves.
-During this time, I started to question my experience and was looking for answers.
-I theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the furry fandom, and learned of the existence of otherkins and therians.
-It was a long time of uncertainty and it hasn't been that long since I settled with my identity.
+When I was 13, dragons took the place of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels; 4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
+During this time, I had started to question my experience and was looking for answers.
+I theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the furry fandom, and learned about the existence of otherkins and therians.
+I never talked with anyone about it, though.

diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md index 12e8d95..b395ac1 100644 --- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md +++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md
@@ -11,13 +11,11 @@ But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human never fel
11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.	11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.	12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.	13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
14	What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?	14	What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for another one.	15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for something else.
16	Driven by this desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.	16	Driven by this strange desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.
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18	23 years later, foxes have taken the place of birds after a detour with dragons and wolves.
19	During this time, I started to question my experience and was looking for answers.
20	I theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the furry fandom, and learned of the existence of otherkins and therians.
21	It was a long time of uncertainty and it hasn't been that long since I settled with my identity.
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23		17
		18	When I was 13, dragons took the place of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels; 4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
		19	During this time, I had started to question my experience and was looking for answers.
		20	I theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the furry fandom, and learned about the existence of otherkins and therians.
		21	I never talked with anyone about it, though.