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 I am not a fox.
 It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
 A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
-But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.
+But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human being doesn't feel right to me.
 
 It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
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 As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
 I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
 
-And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.
-I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.
-4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
-During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.
-Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?
-Were there other people like me?
-I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
+Nothing exciting happened for a while, until I got introduced to fantasy novels 7 years later and felt I was supposed to be a dragon.
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+By then, I had 
+I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
 
 Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
-It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I 
+It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.
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