Dream journal improvements

3 files changed, 32 insertions, 83 deletions

diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/false-awakening.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/false-awakening.md
index 4edc4e1..6499b98 100644
--- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/false-awakening.md
+++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/false-awakening.md
@@ -4,25 +4,12 @@ title:     False awakening
 show_date: true
 ---
 
-It was noon. I was tired and decided to lie down for a bit.
-I didn't want to fall asleep, though, so I tried to stay awake and kept checking the time since I had to go to the uni later.
-This went on for quite a while, resulting in a constant cycle of dozing → remembering to check the time → looking at my smartphone to check the time → going back to dozing → and so on.
+It was noon. I was tired and decided to lie down for a bit. I didn't want to fall asleep, though, so I tried to stay awake and kept checking the time since I had to go to the uni later. This went on for quite a while, resulting in a constant cycle of dozing → remembering to check the time → looking at my smartphone to check the time → going back to dozing → and so on.
 
-At some point, I actually must have fallen asleep for quite a while.
-I opened my eyes to take my smartphone once again when I noticed that my room was dark.
-It must've been late -- about 9 or 10pm -- which immediately irritated me.
-I had been tired, but not _that_ tired.
+At some point, I actually must have fallen asleep for quite a while. I opened my eyes to take my smartphone once again when I noticed that my room was dark. It must've been late -- about 9 or 10pm -- which immediately irritated me. I had been tired, but not _that_ tired.
 
-I stood up and groggily went to my desk to switch on my desk lamp.
-I pressed the button and heard the usual click noise, but nothing happened.
-After a few more tries, I eventually pulled the lamp towards me to see if the LED bulb at least flickered.
-It was completely dead.
+I stood up and groggily went to my desk to switch on my desk lamp. I pressed the button and heard the usual click noise, but nothing happened. After a few more tries, I eventually pulled the lamp towards me to see if the LED bulb at least flickered. It was completely dead.
 
-I walked back to my bed to check on my smartphone what time it actually was.
-I was greeted by my lock screen, but it looked different than usual:
-There was only empty space where the clock should have been and overall it just looked "wrong."
+I walked back to my bed to check on my smartphone what time it actually was. I was greeted by my lock screen, but it looked different than usual: There was only empty space where the clock should have been and overall it just looked "wrong."
 
-This whole situation felt strange and I started to wonder what was going on, when I suddenly felt like all of my strength was sucked out of my body.
-My head was spinning and I collapsed onto my bed.
-I couldn't even think straight anymore and just wished for it to stop, for me to wake up... and that's when I did.
-For real, this time.
+This whole situation felt strange and I started to wonder what was going on, when I suddenly felt like all of my strength was sucked out of my body. My head was spinning and I collapsed onto my bed. I couldn't even think straight anymore and just wished for it to stop, for me to wake up... and that's when I did. For real, this time.
diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/infinite-skyscrapers.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/infinite-skyscrapers.md
index eaf5b7a..d02f9f4 100644
--- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/infinite-skyscrapers.md
+++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/infinite-skyscrapers.md
@@ -4,42 +4,22 @@ title:     Infinite skyscrapers
 show_date: true
 ---
 
-I'm in some strange world that consist of huge buildings, looking a lot like very simple skyscrapers, except they were all interconnected.
-I'm not even sure if there's a floor since I'm just floating, being able to fly around at will.
-There is also something chasing me and I'm trying to get away from it.
+I'm in some strange world that consist of huge buildings, looking a lot like very simple skyscrapers, except they were all interconnected. I'm not even sure if there's a floor since I'm just floating, being able to fly around at will. There is also something chasing me and I'm trying to get away from it.
 
-The buildings around me get denser and more chaotic, some look like glitches in a computer game.
-The creature chasing me seems to absorb buildings into its body, growing larger and more powerful.
+The buildings around me get denser and more chaotic, some look like glitches in a computer game. The creature chasing me seems to absorb buildings into its body, growing larger and more powerful.
 
-Then there's a cut and I'm presumably inside one of those buildings.
-I'm in a dark room with barely any lighting which looks somewhat like a large office.
-It's very cluttered, though.
-There's another similar room next to this one, separated by a glass wall and a door.
-There's also a person with me who I seem to know, and that creature that chased me.
-It seems like it managed to capture us.
+Then there's a cut and I'm presumably inside one of those buildings. I'm in a dark room with barely any lighting which looks somewhat like a large office. It's very cluttered, though. There's another similar room next to this one, separated by a glass wall and a door. There's also a person with me who I seem to know, and that creature that chased me. It seems like it managed to capture us.
 
-It dares us to escape from this situation, and as soon as it said that, the room begins to get locked off.
-There are some red lights blinking and the door connecting our current room with the neighboring room is about to close permanently.
-Panicked, I quickly run through it, but the other person couldn't make it.
+It dares us to escape from this situation, and as soon as it said that, the room begins to get locked off. There are some red lights blinking and the door connecting our current room with the neighboring room is about to close permanently. Panicked, I quickly run through it, but the other person couldn't make it.
 
-I suddenly realize I'm a cat and the other person an even smaller critter, I don't know what.
-It's obvious that the creature is just playing with us, watching our futile efforts to escape for its amusement.
+I suddenly realize I'm a cat and the other person an even smaller critter, I don't know what. It's obvious that the creature is just playing with us, watching our futile efforts to escape for its amusement.
 
 The other person tries to get the door to open again by messing with its circuitry, and I do my best to block the creature's view from what was going on without looking suspicious.
 
-After a while, I start exploring the room and notice that there's a hallway in front of it, also separated by a glass wall and a door.
-However, the wall is broken in one place and has a hole large enough for me to jump through.
-So that's what I do.
-I land in a bunch of glass disks lying on the floor, breaking them, but I'm unharmed.
+After a while, I start exploring the room and notice that there's a hallway in front of it, also separated by a glass wall and a door. However, the wall is broken in one place and has a hole large enough for me to jump through. So that's what I do. I land in a bunch of glass disks lying on the floor, breaking them, but I'm unharmed.
 
-Now being a human again, I take a glass shard with me and run through a door which leads to a staircase.
-It is huge, having the shape of a pill with stairs going along the edge.
-The center is empty so I can see all the floors coming before and after.
-There's no end in any direction.
-I know the creature will come after me soon and so I run upwards as fast as I can.
+Now being a human again, I take a glass shard with me and run through a door which leads to a staircase. It is huge, having the shape of a pill with stairs going along the edge. The center is empty so I can see all the floors coming before and after. There's no end in any direction. I know the creature will come after me soon and so I run upwards as fast as I can.
 
-I made it about 5 floors when I hear a door burst open.
-I quickly enter the room next to me, hoping that the creature hasn't seen me.
+I made it about 5 floors when I hear a door burst open. I quickly enter the room next to me, hoping that the creature hasn't seen me.
 
-This floor was very large and open and brightly lit.
-The dream starts to make no sense anymore and that's it.
+This floor was very large and open and brightly lit. The dream starts to make no sense anymore and that's it.
diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/soccer-injections-werewolves.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/soccer-injections-werewolves.md
index c9f2d83..1b8c2b9 100644
--- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/soccer-injections-werewolves.md
+++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/dreams/soccer-injections-werewolves.md
@@ -4,39 +4,21 @@ title:     Soccer, injections and werewolves
 show_date: true
 ---
 
-*I don't remember the real date for this dream, just that it happened in 2012.*
-
-I was at a gym.
-It was separated in two halves by a huge wall in the middle.
-It stretch all the way to the outer walls, so it was possible to access any side easily.
-In front of the wall there was a soccer goal.
-Overall, even though it looked quite different from the gym where I used to have PE, it did remind me of it.  
-My classmates were there as well and we were playing soccer together.
-
-The environment changed:
-I was still at the gym, but the wall in the middle and the goal was gone.
-Instead, there were many tables and the walls were plastered with scientific posters.
-The gym suddenly seemed larger than it had been before.  
-My biology teacher showed up and gave us a task:
-Form groups of two, create a mixture using some chemicals, and inject it into one of our eyes.
-So that's what I did -- until it was time for the injection.
-Understandably, I got scared at this point and refused to follow through.
-
-The situation changed again.
-I was sitting at a table with some of my classmates in a small tavern.
-It looked quite old-fashioned and I distinctly remember being surrounded by wooden furniture.  
-My legs felt strange, but it didn't bother me because I knew it was an effect of the mixture we had previously produced.
-During that time skip, I must've changed my mind on that injection.  
-I eventually did get curious about what was going on with my legs and decided to take a look.
-Instead of my feet, what I saw were black paws.
-My classmates apparently had noticed the changes as well and one of them said "Ah, so it has begun."
-
-This is when my memories get somewhat hazy.
-
-The changes kept progressing and when they had gotten very far -- my body was covered in fur, I had a muzzle, could barely walk on two legs, and so on -- I was talking to my teacher and asked: "How long will it take?"
-His answer was: "As long as you want, but you have to return."
-
-The last thing I remember was me standing in front of the tavern with four other people.
-The changes were complete and we had become werewolf-like creatures.
-We ran into the woods that surrounded us, and that's when my memories fade.
-All I know is that the dream didn't end there just yet.
+*I don't remember the real date of this dream, just that it happened in 2012.*
+
+I'm at a large gym. It is separated in two halves by a huge wall with a goal in front of it. The wall doesn't stretch all the way to the outer walls so it's possible to go from one side to the other. It looks quite different from the gym where I used to have PE, but it still feels like it somehow. My classmates are there as well and are playing soccer together.
+
+Suddenly, the environment changes. It's still the same gym, but now the dividing wall and the goal are gone. Instead, there are many tables and the walls are plastered with scientific posters.  
+My biology teacher shows up and gives all of us an assignment: Form groups of two, create a mixture with some specific chemicals, and inject it into our eyes. So that's what I do, until it's finally time for the injection. I'm too scared and refuse to do it.
+
+The situation changes again. I'm now inside of a tavern, sitting at a table with some of my classmates. The tavern reminds me of a log cabin I was once at -- the walls and the furniture are made of heavy wooden logs.  
+My legs feel strange, but I'm not bothered by it because that's an expected effect of the mixture we previously produced. Looks like I've changed my mind between the last scene and this one.  
+After some time, I finally get curios and take a look at my legs. Instead of my feet, there are black paws. My classmates must've noticed their changes as well, as one of them says: "Ah, so it has begun."
+
+The dream gets hazy and all I know is that the changes keep progressing.
+
+There's a moment of clarity. The changes have gotten very far since my body is now covered in black fur, I have a muzzle, and due to the anatomical changes I can only barely stand on two legs. I start talking with my teacher and ask: "How long will it take/last?" He answers: "As long as you want, but you'll have to return."
+
+The dream gets hazy again, followed by one last scene: I'm in front of the tavern with four other people. The changes are complete and we are now werewolves. We run into the forest that surrounds us.
+
+This isn't the end of the dream yet, but I don't remember anything from this point.