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-As a child, I frequently imagined I was a bird.
+As a child, I wanted to be a bird.
-I had watched Disney's "The Sword in the Stone", an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
+I had watched Disney's *The Sword in the Stone*, an animated film set in medieval England about an orphan called Arthur who meets Merlin, a wizard.
-The idea of being an animal, but especially a bird, resonated with me.
+Merlin decides to become Arthur's tutor and teaches him various lessons in a quite unconventional way -- by turning him into a fish, a squirrel, and eventually a sparrow.
+The idea of being an animal, and specially a bird, was incredibly fascinating to me.
 How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?
 To feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
 To be perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
-As I grew up, I explored this concept further and further and my fantasies became increasingly detailed and immersive.
-When I was 13 years old, dragons took over the role of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels.
+Nowadays, I don't want to be a bird anymore, of course.
+I want to be a fox.
+I can't explain why I'm feeling this way
-By then, I had 
-I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
 Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
 It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.

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6	As a child, I frequently imagined I was a bird.	6	As a child, I wanted to be a bird.
7	I had watched Disney's "The Sword in the Stone", an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.	7	I had watched Disney's The Sword in the Stone, an animated film set in medieval England about an orphan called Arthur who meets Merlin, a wizard.
8	The idea of being an animal, but especially a bird, resonated with me.	8	Merlin decides to become Arthur's tutor and teaches him various lessons in a quite unconventional way -- by turning him into a fish, a squirrel, and eventually a sparrow.
		9	The idea of being an animal, and specially a bird, was incredibly fascinating to me.
9	How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?	10	How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?
10	To feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?	11	To feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
11	To be perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?	12	To be perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
12	As I grew up, I explored this concept further and further and my fantasies became increasingly detailed and immersive.
13		13
14	When I was 13 years old, dragons took over the role of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels.	14	Nowadays, I don't want to be a bird anymore, of course.
		15	I want to be a fox.
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		17	I can't explain why I'm feeling this way
16		18
17		19
18	By then, I had
19	I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
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21	Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.	20	Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
22	It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.	21	It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.
23		22