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@@ -12,9 +12,10 @@ It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
 What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
-As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for the right one; something that would never leave me alone again.
+As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for another one; something that would never leave me alone again.
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 Driven by this desire, I started to fantasize about being a bird frequently.
-It was like a spiritual activity, something I fully concentrated on when I had time for myself so I could make this fantasy as realistic as possible.
+For me it was -- and still is -- a strictly personal and mental matter, so I made sure to have time for myself and focused on making the body feel realistic to let me forget about reality.
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+The only thing that has changed over time was the creature I became in my fantasy.
 
-For many years I frequently fantasized about being a bird, then a dragon, very briefly a wolf, and finally a fox.
-By that time I was 18 years old and