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-As a child, I frequently imagined I was a bird.
-I had watched Disney's "The Sword in the Stone", an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
-The idea of being an animal, but especially a bird, resonated with me.
+As a child, I wanted to be a bird.
+I had watched Disney's *The Sword in the Stone*, an animated film set in medieval England about an orphan called Arthur who meets Merlin, a wizard.
+Merlin decides to become Arthur's tutor and teaches him various lessons in a quite unconventional way -- by turning him into a fish, a squirrel, and eventually a sparrow.
+The idea of being an animal, and specially a bird, was incredibly fascinating to me.
 How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?
 To feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
 To be perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
-As I grew up, I explored this concept further and further and my fantasies became increasingly detailed and immersive.
 
-When I was 13 years old, dragons took over the role of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels.
+Nowadays, I don't want to be a bird anymore, of course.
+I want to be a fox.
 
+I can't explain why I'm feeling this way
 
 
-By then, I had 
-I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.
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 Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
 It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.