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-As a child, I spent a lot of time imagining what being a bird would be like.
+As a child, I frequently imagined I was a bird.
+I had watched Disney's "The Sword in the Stone", an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
+The idea of being an animal, but especially a bird, resonated with me.
 How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?
-To have the ability to fly and feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
-To be treated and perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
+To feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
+To be perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
+As I grew up, I explored this concept further and further and my fantasies became increasingly detailed and immersive.
 
-This fascination was sparked when I was 6 years old.
-I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to teach him different things about life.
-One of these transformation involves Arthur being turned into a yellow sparrow.
+When I was 13 years old, dragons took over the role of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels.
 
 
 
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-The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
-What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
-As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
-I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
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-Nothing exciting happened for a while, until I got introduced to fantasy novels 7 years later and felt I was supposed to be a dragon.
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 By then, I had 
 I had realized by then that my experience was far from normal and I finally decided to do research on the internet, where I stumbled across the furry fandom and found therians.