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-I am not a fox.
-It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
-A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
-But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human being doesn't feel right to me.
+As a child, I spent a lot of time imagining what being a bird would be like.
+How would it feel to experience and interact with the world through such a completely different body?
+To have the ability to fly and feel my feathers bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
+To be treated and perceived by other creatures not as a human but as a bird?
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+This fascination was sparked when I was 6 years old.
+I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to teach him different things about life.
+One of these transformation involves Arthur being turned into a yellow sparrow.
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-It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
-I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
 What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
 As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
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 Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
 It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after looking into them it didn't resonate with me.
  
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+I am not a fox.
+It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise.
+A fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
+A fox couldn't have a job as a software developer.
+A fox wouldn't look in the mirror and see a human.