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@@ -12,7 +12,9 @@ It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
 What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
-As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human nature and longed for this experience; something that would never leave me alone again.
+As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for the right one; something that would never leave me alone again.
+Driven by this desire, I started to fantasize about being a bird frequently.
-I frequently imagined I was a bird for many years, but as I grew up, I found other creatures I identified with: dragons, wolves and eventually foxes.
+It was like a spiritual activity, something I fully concentrated on when I had time for myself so I could make this fantasy as realistic as possible.
+For many years I frequently fantasized about being a bird, then a dragon, very briefly a wolf, and finally a fox.
+By that time I was 18 years old and

diff --git a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md index 8e2a2ef..bf99617 100644 --- a/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md +++ b/content/9thPK7O3xn/posts/i-am-not-a-fox.md
@@ -12,7 +12,9 @@ It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.	12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.	13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
14	What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?	14	What would it feel like to have such a completely different body, to have a beak and wings and to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human nature and longed for this experience; something that would never leave me alone again.	15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my human body and longed for the right one; something that would never leave me alone again.
16		16	Driven by this desire, I started to fantasize about being a bird frequently.
17	I frequently imagined I was a bird for many years, but as I grew up, I found other creatures I identified with: dragons, wolves and eventually foxes.	17	It was like a spiritual activity, something I fully concentrated on when I had time for myself so I could make this fantasy as realistic as possible.
18		18
		19	For many years I frequently fantasized about being a bird, then a dragon, very briefly a wolf, and finally a fox.
		20	By that time I was 18 years old and