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 I am not a fox.
 It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
 A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
-But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human never felt right to me.
+But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.
 
 It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
 What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
 As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
-Driven by this strange desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.
+I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
 
-When I was 13 years old, dragons took the place of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels; 4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
-Somewhere along the way, I had realized that my experience was far from normal and I finally started to look for answers.
-What was this persistent feeling in the back of my mind that made me think I was supposed to be an animal?
+And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.
+I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.
+4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
+During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.
+Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?
 Were there other people like me?
-I did a lot of introspection, theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the [furry fandom], and learned about the existence of [otherkins] and [therians].
+I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
 
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-[furry fandom]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Furry_fandom
-[otherkins]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Otherkin
-[therians]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Therianthropy
+Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
+It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I