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 I am not a fox.
 It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
 A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
-But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human never felt right to me.
+But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.
 It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
 I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
 The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
 What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
 As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
-Driven by this strange desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.
+I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
-When I was 13 years old, dragons took the place of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels; 4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
+And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.
-Somewhere along the way, I had realized that my experience was far from normal and I finally started to look for answers.
+I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.
-What was this persistent feeling in the back of my mind that made me think I was supposed to be an animal?
+4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
+During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.
+Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?
 Were there other people like me?
-I did a lot of introspection, theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the [furry fandom], and learned about the existence of [otherkins] and [therians].
+I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
+Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
+It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I 
-[furry fandom]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Furry_fandom
-[otherkins]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Otherkin
-[therians]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Therianthropy

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6	I am not a fox.	6	I am not a fox.
7	It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.	7	It would be ridiculous to claim otherwise since a fox wouldn't be able to type on a keyboard, not to mention come up with this text in the first place.
8	A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.	8	A fox probably couldn't have a job as a software developer, too.
9	But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human never felt right to me.	9	But despite reality leaving no room for doubt, my existence as a human doesn't feel right to me.
10		10
11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.	11	It began one evening when I was about 6 years old.
12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.	12	I was watching "The Sword in the Stone" by Disney, an animated film about a boy called Arthur who is transformed into various animals by Merlin the wizard in order to educate him.
13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.	13	The idea of possessing a nonhuman body fascinated me immediately, especially that of a bird.
14	What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?	14	What would it feel like to experience and interact with the world, to be covered in feathers that are bristling in the wind as I'm flying through the sky?
15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.	15	As I imagined myself in this situation, something inside of my mind awakened; something that rejected my humanity and longed for the life I was supposed to have.
16	Driven by this strange desire, imagining I was a bird became a frequent activity.	16	I didn't lose sight of the fact that I was a human, but I started to imagine what being a bird would be like frequently.
17		17
18	When I was 13 years old, dragons took the place of birds after I got introduced to fantasy novels; 4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.	18	And that's how things were for 7 years, until I got introduced to fantasy novels.
19	Somewhere along the way, I had realized that my experience was far from normal and I finally started to look for answers.	19	I became obsessed with dragons and they quickly took over the role of birds for me.
20	What was this persistent feeling in the back of my mind that made me think I was supposed to be an animal?	20	4 years later it was wolves, and shortly after foxes.
		21	During this time, I had slowly realized that my experience was anything but usual and started looking for answers.
		22	Why did I think I was supposed to be an animal?
21	Were there other people like me?	23	Were there other people like me?
22	I did a lot of introspection, theorized I had the soul of a dragon, stumbled across the [furry fandom], and learned about the existence of [otherkins] and [therians].	24	I did a lot of research on the internet, stumbled across the furry fandom, and found therians.
23		25
24		26	Therians are individuals who believe they are an animal on some level, either spiritually -- such as past lives or souls -- or psychologically.
25		27	It sounds like the perfect answer to my question, but after my initial research into therians I
26	[furry fandom]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Furry_fandom
27	[otherkins]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Otherkin
28	[therians]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Therianthropy